Yahso I can't make polls, so I'm gonna ask some questions in here~ CX

I am writing my own novel which I hope to publish in the future. It's along the lines of Alice in Wonderland, though not exactly like it.

I want to know if YOU -fingerpoint- want me to post my story here on DA.

Here's an excerpt so you know what you'd be gettin'.

“Hold on!” Meggy interrupted, shoving the picture in his face. “My eye! A part of my left eye has turned black! It wasn’t there before! Something is happening to my eyes!”
Mr. Knidz took the picture and squinted at it, at Meggy, then back to the picture. “Could this, perhaps, be the gradual change the Encyclopedia was frettin’ about?”
“I think so. Everyone here in Metrophantasmal has black eyes, but I have blue eyes.” Meggy gestured to the picture. Visible in her eyes, a tiny section, like a very thin slice out of a pie, was ebony black. “But now they’re turning black. We have to find my shadow, or else I’ll turn into a Metrophantasmalian and be stuck here forever!”
“Don’t ye worry, kid. We’re gonna find yer shadow if it’s the last thing we do,” Mr. Knidz promised.
“That’s what I’m afraid of,” she said gravely.